课室很脏。
Add a clear detail垃圾桶倒在一旁，纸屑散落了一地。
P3 Chinese picture composition · Teamwork & sequence
打扫课室Cleaning the Classroom
Two classmates work together to clean a messy floor.
01 · Look closely
Chinese composition pictures 看图说故事
Read from top left to top right, then bottom left to bottom right. Tell the story aloud before you write.
Need help describing each picture? 看图提示
- 下课后，小明和小丽看到地上散落着纸屑。
- 小丽扶好垃圾桶，小明拿来扫把和畚箕。
- 两人分工合作，把地上的纸屑清理干净。
- 老师看见整洁的课室，称赞了他们。
02 · Plan your story
Guiding questions 想一想
- 课室里哪里不整洁？
- 小明和小丽各自做了什么？
- 可以用哪些词说明事情的先后？
- 打扫后有什么变化？
Include a beginning, what happened next and an ending. Add a feeling or a short conversation where it fits.
03 · Find your words
Useful words & phrases 好词好句
Pick a few expressions you understand. A clear sentence is more useful than a difficult phrase used incorrectly.
- 纸屑
- scraps of paper
- 扫把
- broom
- 畚箕
- dustpan
- 分工合作
- share tasks and work together
- 整洁
- neat and clean
- 称赞
- praise
04 · Read & compare
Sample composition 参考范文
Try your own draft first. This is one possible answer, with about 197 Chinese characters.
Show sample composition · 展开范文
打扫课室
下课后，同学们陆续离开课室。小明和小丽正准备出去，忽然发现垃圾桶倒在一旁，地上散落着许多纸屑。
小丽说：“地上这么脏，我们一起打扫吧！”小明马上点头。他去拿扫把和畚箕，小丽先把垃圾桶扶好，再用夹子捡起较大的纸屑。
接着，小明把剩下的纸屑扫进畚箕，小丽扶稳垃圾桶，让他把垃圾倒进去。两人分工合作，不一会儿就把地板清理干净了。他们把工具放回原处，再洗干净双手。
老师走进课室，看见整洁的环境，称赞他们是有责任心的好孩子。小明和小丽虽然有点累，却感到十分开心。
What to notice
Follow the event sequence. Notice the specific actions, the characters’ feelings and the short dialogue. The ending responds to what happened.
05 · Improve one sentence
Small changes, a clearer story
These are optional ways to add detail. Your child can choose different words.
他们扫地。
Add a clear detail两人分工合作，一个扫地，一个扶稳垃圾桶。
老师说很好。
Add a clear detail老师看见整洁的课室，笑着称赞了他们。
Keep the stories going
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Pictures & sample answerPandaHuaWen · P3 Chinese Picture Composition
打扫课室
Name: ____________________ Date: ______________
仔细看图，先说一说，再用自己的话写一个完整的故事。
- 课室里哪里不整洁？
- 小明和小丽各自做了什么？
- 可以用哪些词说明事情的先后？
- 打扫后有什么变化？