纸飞走了。
Add a clear detail一阵风吹来，把包装纸吹到了草地上。
P3 Chinese picture composition · Cause & responsible action
爱护公园Caring for the Park
A blown-away snack wrapper becomes a lesson in keeping the park clean.
01 · Look closely
Chinese composition pictures 看图说故事
Read from top left to top right, then bottom left to bottom right. Tell the story aloud before you write.
Need help describing each picture? 看图提示
- 小明和爸爸在公园吃点心，把包装纸留在长椅上。
- 一阵风把包装纸吹到草地上，爸爸提醒小明。
- 小明捡起包装纸，把它丢进垃圾桶。
- 父子俩离开干净的公园，小明记住了这个教训。
02 · Plan your story
Guiding questions 想一想
- 包装纸为什么会掉到草地上？
- 爸爸可能怎样提醒小明？
- 小明做了什么来改正错误？
- 怎样用行动表现他学到了什么？
Include a beginning, what happened next and an ending. Add a feeling or a short conversation where it fits.
03 · Find your words
Useful words & phrases 好词好句
Pick a few expressions you understand. A clear sentence is more useful than a difficult phrase used incorrectly.
- 点心
- snack
- 包装纸
- wrapper
- 一阵风
- a gust of wind
- 提醒
- remind
- 惭愧
- ashamed; sorry about a mistake
- 爱护环境
- care for the environment
04 · Read & compare
Sample composition 参考范文
Try your own draft first. This is one possible answer, with about 201 Chinese characters.
Show sample composition · 展开范文
爱护公园
星期六下午，小明和爸爸到公园游玩。他们走累了，便坐在长椅上吃点心。小明吃完后，随手把包装纸放在椅子上。
一阵风吹来，把包装纸吹到了草地上。爸爸看见了，提醒小明：“垃圾不能留在公园里。要是每个人都这样做，公园就不干净了。”
小明听了，感到很惭愧。他马上跑到草地旁，弯下腰捡起包装纸，再把它丢进附近的垃圾桶。爸爸看见他改正了错误，满意地点点头。
离开前，小明还看了看长椅和草地，确定没有留下垃圾。他对爸爸说：“以后我会把垃圾丢好，爱护环境。”父子俩望着干净的公园，开心地笑了。
What to notice
Follow the event sequence. Notice the specific actions, the characters’ feelings and the short dialogue. The ending responds to what happened.
05 · Improve one sentence
Small changes, a clearer story
These are optional ways to add detail. Your child can choose different words.
小明捡垃圾。
Add a clear detail小明弯下腰，捡起草地上的包装纸。
他知道错了。
Add a clear detail小明感到很惭愧，马上用行动改正错误。
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爱护公园
Name: ____________________ Date: ______________
仔细看图，先说一说，再用自己的话写一个完整的故事。
- 包装纸为什么会掉到草地上？
- 爸爸可能怎样提醒小明？
- 小明做了什么来改正错误？
- 怎样用行动表现他学到了什么？