下雨了。
Add a clear detail天空乌云密布，豆大的雨点落了下来。
P3 Chinese picture composition · Weather & kindness
雨中送伞Sharing an Umbrella
Two classmates share an umbrella on a rainy walk home.
01 · Look closely
Chinese composition pictures 看图说故事
Read from top left to top right, then bottom left to bottom right. Tell the story aloud before you write.
Need help describing each picture? 看图提示
- 放学时下起大雨，小文没有带伞。
- 小明撑着伞，邀请小文一起走。
- 两个同学共撑一把伞，沿着人行道回家。
- 到了有遮盖的地方，小文向小明道谢。
02 · Plan your story
Guiding questions 想一想
- 天气有什么变化？
- 小文为什么站在屋檐下？
- 小明怎样帮助小文？他们可以说什么？
- 到家附近后，小文有什么感受？
Include a beginning, what happened next and an ending. Add a feeling or a short conversation where it fits.
03 · Find your words
Useful words & phrases 好词好句
Pick a few expressions you understand. A clear sentence is more useful than a difficult phrase used incorrectly.
- 乌云密布
- covered with dark clouds
- 屋檐
- eaves; shelter under a roof
- 发愁
- worry
- 撑开
- open an umbrella
- 并肩
- side by side
- 温暖
- warmth; feeling cared for
04 · Read & compare
Sample composition 参考范文
Try your own draft first. This is one possible answer, with about 199 Chinese characters.
Show sample composition · 展开范文
雨中送伞
放学时，天空乌云密布，不一会儿就下起了大雨。小文没有带伞，只好站在学校的屋檐下，看着雨水发愁。
这时，小明撑开蓝色的雨伞，准备回家。他看见小文，便走过去问：“你没有带伞吗？”小文点点头。小明说：“我们住得很近，一起走吧！”
小文高兴地走到伞下。两人并肩沿着人行道慢慢走，小明还把雨伞往小文那边移了一点。一路上，他们一边走，一边聊天。
到了住家附近有遮盖的地方，小文说：“谢谢你，要不是你帮忙，我还不知道要等多久呢！”小明笑着说：“不客气！”虽然外面下着雨，小文的心里却感到十分温暖。
What to notice
Follow the event sequence. Notice the specific actions, the characters’ feelings and the short dialogue. The ending responds to what happened.
05 · Improve one sentence
Small changes, a clearer story
These are optional ways to add detail. Your child can choose different words.
小文没有伞。
Add a clear detail小文站在屋檐下，望着大雨发愁。
一起回家。
Add a clear detail两个同学共撑一把伞，沿着人行道慢慢走。
Keep the stories going
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Actions & dialogue
帮助同学Helping a Classmate
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Pictures & sample answer
Clear event sequence
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A wallet found in the park is returned with help from an officer.
Pictures & sample answerPandaHuaWen · P3 Chinese Picture Composition
雨中送伞
Name: ____________________ Date: ______________
仔细看图，先说一说，再用自己的话写一个完整的故事。
- 天气有什么变化？
- 小文为什么站在屋檐下？
- 小明怎样帮助小文？他们可以说什么？
- 到家附近后，小文有什么感受？