苹果掉了。
Add a clear detail购物袋的提手断了，苹果滚落到地上。
P3 Chinese picture composition · Actions & gratitude
帮助老人Helping an Elderly Person
Xiaoming helps an elderly neighbour with her fallen groceries.
01 · Look closely
Chinese composition pictures 看图说故事
Read from top left to top right, then bottom left to bottom right. Tell the story aloud before you write.
Need help describing each picture? 看图提示
- 老奶奶的购物袋破了，苹果滚到地上。
- 小明上前帮忙，把苹果一一捡起来。
- 小明用自己的袋子装好苹果，陪老奶奶走。
- 到了家门口，老奶奶向小明道谢。
02 · Plan your story
Guiding questions 想一想
- 老奶奶遇到了什么困难？
- 小明怎样帮忙？请按顺序说。
- 小明和老奶奶可能说了什么？
- 帮助别人后，小明有什么感受？
Include a beginning, what happened next and an ending. Add a feeling or a short conversation where it fits.
03 · Find your words
Useful words & phrases 好词好句
Pick a few expressions you understand. A clear sentence is more useful than a difficult phrase used incorrectly.
- 购物袋
- shopping bag
- 滚落
- roll down or fall out
- 连忙
- at once
- 一一
- one by one
- 陪伴
- accompany
- 感激
- grateful
04 · Read & compare
Sample composition 参考范文
Try your own draft first. This is one possible answer, with about 213 Chinese characters.
Show sample composition · 展开范文
帮助老人
一天傍晚，小明经过组屋楼下，看见一位住在附近的老奶奶提着购物袋慢慢走。忽然，袋子的提手断了，几个苹果滚落到地上。老奶奶望着苹果，十分着急。
小明连忙走上前，说：“老奶奶，我来帮您！”他蹲下身，把地上的苹果一一捡起来。看见袋子已经破了，他便拿出自己带着的蓝色购物袋，把苹果装好。
老奶奶住在附近，小明就提着袋子，陪伴她慢慢走回家。一路上，他还提醒老奶奶小心脚下的台阶。
到了家门口，小明把袋子交给老奶奶。老奶奶感激地说：“谢谢你，真是个好孩子！”小明笑着回答：“不用谢！”虽然提东西有点累，他的心里却很快乐。
What to notice
Follow the event sequence. Notice the specific actions, the characters’ feelings and the short dialogue. The ending responds to what happened.
05 · Improve one sentence
Small changes, a clearer story
These are optional ways to add detail. Your child can choose different words.
小明帮她。
Add a clear detail小明蹲下身，把苹果一一捡起来。
她谢谢他。
Add a clear detail老奶奶接过袋子，感激地向小明道谢。
Keep the stories going
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Pictures & sample answer
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Pictures & sample answerPandaHuaWen · P3 Chinese Picture Composition
帮助老人
Name: ____________________ Date: ______________
仔细看图，先说一说，再用自己的话写一个完整的故事。
- 老奶奶遇到了什么困难？
- 小明怎样帮忙？请按顺序说。
- 小明和老奶奶可能说了什么？
- 帮助别人后，小明有什么感受？