他跑得快。
Add a clear detail小明急着去找朋友，沿着走廊飞快地跑。
P3 Chinese picture composition · Getting help & resolution
一次小意外A Small Accident
A fall in the corridor teaches Xiaoming to walk safely.
01 · Look closely
Chinese composition pictures 看图说故事
Read from top left to top right, then bottom left to bottom right. Tell the story aloud before you write.
Need help describing each picture? 看图提示
- 小明在学校走廊里奔跑，小文走在后面。
- 小明跌倒了，小文留在旁边，向老师求助。
- 老师带小明到办公室，处理膝盖上的小伤口。
- 小明和小文慢慢走，小明记住了安全规则。
02 · Plan your story
Guiding questions 想一想
- 意外发生在哪里？为什么会发生？
- 小文看见朋友跌倒，怎样找人帮忙？
- 老师做了什么？
- 结尾怎样表现小明记住了教训？
Include a beginning, what happened next and an ending. Add a feeling or a short conversation where it fits.
03 · Find your words
Useful words & phrases 好词好句
Pick a few expressions you understand. A clear sentence is more useful than a difficult phrase used incorrectly.
- 走廊
- corridor
- 奔跑
- run quickly
- 跌倒
- fall down
- 膝盖
- knee
- 求助
- ask for help
- 小心
- be careful
04 · Read & compare
Sample composition 参考范文
Try your own draft first. This is one possible answer, with about 198 Chinese characters.
Show sample composition · 展开范文
一次小意外
下课了，小明急着去找朋友，在学校的走廊里奔跑。小文走在后面，提醒他：“别跑，小心跌倒！”可是小明没有停下来。
突然，小明脚下一滑，跌坐在地上。他捂着膝盖，疼得皱起了眉头。小文连忙走到他身边，没有拉他起来，而是向附近的老师求助。
老师走过来，先检查小明的情况，再扶他到办公室休息。她处理好膝盖上的小伤口，贴上了胶布。小明轻声说：“谢谢老师，也谢谢小文。”
休息后，小明和小文慢慢走回课室。小明不好意思地说：“以后我不会在走廊里跑了。”他记住了这次教训，知道安全比赶时间更重要。
What to notice
Follow the event sequence. Notice the specific actions, the characters’ feelings and the short dialogue. The ending responds to what happened.
05 · Improve one sentence
Small changes, a clearer story
These are optional ways to add detail. Your child can choose different words.
他跌倒了。
Add a clear detail小明脚下一滑，跌坐在地上，疼得皱起眉头。
他以后小心。
Add a clear detail小明放慢脚步，和朋友一起慢慢走回课室。
Keep the stories going
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一次小意外
Name: ____________________ Date: ______________
仔细看图，先说一说，再用自己的话写一个完整的故事。
- 意外发生在哪里？为什么会发生？
- 小文看见朋友跌倒，怎样找人帮忙？
- 老师做了什么？
- 结尾怎样表现小明记住了教训？